The last two sentences of the Ratings paragraph could be combined with a comma (ie ".act as a health meter, and remaining stars at the end."). What is a "Down" command? Try to cut down on semicolon usage in order to have more variety in how you connect sentences.
"The game was later received" -> "The game later received" Considering SC5P2 has been released on Windows, PS3, and 360, it feels appropriate to either not mention the face buttons of the respective platforms or mention the 360 and PS3 face buttons as well. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.Ī (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):.It follows the neutral point of view policy.It is factually accurate and verifiable.Ī ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism):.GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)Ī (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
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